>>326758210
I think the text on this overall is too busy, doesn't flow, and is hard to read since it blends into the background. The main title text also goes across the center fold which may not work for a "magazine". If it were me I'd definitely not turn the cards with text on them, they should be kept straight and on top of everything to make it easy to read. You may consider moving them to either side of the page as framing. For example that top left corner doesn't have much in it and you could put the main card with text there.
Colors also seem off as well but not sure I can pinpoint why.
Do you have the other pages too? I haven't been paying attention to this.